I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Azaria! It's Eden from Paroa School! I think you did a great job on this blog post! How long did this take you to make? Also what do you like about tacos? If I could pick something to rain from the sky for one day it would probably be McDonalds. Do you think you could change anything about this blog post to make it better than before? Keep up the good work! Bye from Eden.
Hi Azaria my name is Dakota from Ahipara School. I really like your blog maybe you could add more slides to it, make the title easier to read and also put a question mark at the end of your question. But other then that keep the hard work!
Hi Azaria, It's me, Katelyn. You did an awesome job on this blog post. Maye next time you could make it so the writing is more readible at the top. Maybe next time you could add a caption to explanin what you did. I like tacos too but I would want white chocolate to fall down the sky because that is my favourite food. Keep up the great work. Katelyn.
Hi Azaria, Its Ngairon from Ahipara School, I like this blog post because it talks about what you would want to choose in this situation. If I were to choose a food that would rain down from the sky, It would probably be hot chips. Tino pai keep up the great work!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hello Azaria! It's Eden from Paroa School! I think you did a great job on this blog post! How long did this take you to make? Also what do you like about tacos? If I could pick something to rain from the sky for one day it would probably be McDonalds. Do you think you could change anything about this blog post to make it better than before? Keep up the good work! Bye from Eden.
ReplyDeleteHi Azaria my name is Dakota from Ahipara School. I really like your blog maybe you could add more slides to it, make the title easier to read and also put a question mark at the end of your question. But other then that keep the hard work!
ReplyDeleteHi Azaria, It's me, Katelyn.
ReplyDeleteYou did an awesome job on this blog post.
Maye next time you could make it so the writing is more readible at the top. Maybe next time you could add a caption to explanin what you did.
I like tacos too but I would want white chocolate to fall down the sky because that is my favourite food.
Keep up the great work.
Katelyn.
Hi Azaria, Its Ngairon from Ahipara School, I like this blog post because it talks about what you would want to choose in this situation. If I were to choose a food that would rain down from the sky, It would probably be hot chips. Tino pai keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteHi Azaria its me Gunveen in your class. You have thoughtfull thoughts. i really like your idea about if the could one day rain any food.
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