I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
This is my poem i have done for reading it is about the ocean/beach we had to use snarl words or purr words and i had used purr words meaning positive words
Kia Ora Azaria, its Latoya from Ahipara school. I have a great picture in my head while I read your amazing bit of information. It has good describing words and a good reason why you had to use positive words. In my opinion I say next time use some full stops, commas, and capital letters that need to be in the correct places. Overall it was Great! Paruheke(Perfect)!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia Ora Azaria, its Latoya from Ahipara school. I have a great picture in my head while I read your amazing bit of information. It has good describing words and a good reason why you had to use positive words. In my opinion I say next time use some full stops, commas, and capital letters that need to be in the correct places. Overall it was Great! Paruheke(Perfect)!
ReplyDeletehi Latoya thank you for this comment i will next time do those things.
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ReplyDeleteits Atherton and Jimmy we like your work its so amazing reading it keep up the amazing work.