I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Azaria, It's me Katelyn. I really like your post. Maybe next time you could add a caption to explain what you did, what you think was difficult and what you enjoyed about this activity. Other than that, I think this is a wonderful blog post. Why did you do this activity? Byee!!
Hi Azaira it's me "Dakota" from Ahipara School. I like your blog about "Richie McCaw". The only thing you should do next time is to make your writing bigger and easier to read. Keep great work!(:
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Azaria, It's me Katelyn. I really like your post.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you could add a caption to explain what you did, what you think was difficult and what you enjoyed about this activity.
Other than that, I think this is a wonderful blog post.
Why did you do this activity?
Byee!!
Hi Azaira it's me "Dakota" from Ahipara School. I like your blog about "Richie McCaw". The only thing you should do next time is to make your writing bigger and easier to read. Keep great work!(:
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