I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Azaria, My name is Katelyn from Paroa School. My teacher said that I have to comment on your blog for the rest of the year. So every friday I will comment on your blog. I like your story, maybe next time you could control C then control shift V. If you do that then your story will be all one piece. Maybe next time you could add a caption so people know why you did this and if you enjoyed if it or not.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Azaria, My name is Katelyn from Paroa School. My teacher said that I have to comment on your blog for the rest of the year. So every friday I will comment on your blog. I like your story, maybe next time you could control C then control shift V. If you do that then your story will be all one piece. Maybe next time you could add a caption so people know why you did this and if you enjoyed if it or not.
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