I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Azaria, My name is Katelyn from Paroa School. My teacher gave my whole class buddies to commet on for the rest of the year. My buddy is you. (Yay) I like how you put the video that your teacher made for your class on you blog post. It is cool that you slide can move on its own. Maybe next time you could write a caption explaning what you did and why you did it. You could also tell us in you caption of what you enjoyed about this activty and what you felt was difficult. Keep up the great work. Looking foward to see what you post next. Bye!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Azaria, My name is Katelyn from Paroa School. My teacher gave my whole class buddies to commet on for the rest of the year. My buddy is you. (Yay) I like how you put the video that your teacher made for your class on you blog post. It is cool that you slide can move on its own. Maybe next time you could write a caption explaning what you did and why you did it. You could also tell us in you caption of what you enjoyed about this activty and what you felt was difficult. Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteLooking foward to see what you post next.
Bye!