I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, 26 June 2020
Wednesday, 10 June 2020
Monday, 23 March 2020
Wednesday, 20 November 2019
We are learning to write a Narrative story.
Plan. . .
3rd person
Who. Amy, May, Sarah the Teacher
’’OMG I just remembered we have exams tomorrow” Amy whispered
’’oooh I hope we do not fail our exams,” said May dramatically
’’Don't worry girls it will all be fine” the teacher replied.
It was the next day and. . .
Their teacher was gone there substitute teacher was really strict
’’Oh no is that a dead body over there,” Amy said in fear
’’I think its Sarah our teacher” May replied to Amy.
As they were walking home they saw a shadow walking behind them and they could also hear footsteps following them all the way home.
Then the next day Amy and May were gone . . . TO BE CONTINUED
Friday, 24 March 2017
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