We are learning to write a Narrative story.
Plan. . .
3rd person
Who. Amy, May, Sarah the Teacher
’’OMG I just remembered we have exams tomorrow” Amy whispered
’’oooh I hope we do not fail our exams,” said May dramatically
’’Don't worry girls it will all be fine” the teacher replied.
It was the next day and. . .
Their teacher was gone there substitute teacher was really strict
’’Oh no is that a dead body over there,” Amy said in fear
’’I think its Sarah our teacher” May replied to Amy.
As they were walking home they saw a shadow walking behind them and they could also hear footsteps following them all the way home.
Then the next day Amy and May were gone . . . TO BE CONTINUED
Hi my name is Carlos and I go to paroa school next time you could make the lines little smaller.
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DeleteHi Azaria It's me Katelyn again. This story is amazing. I can't wait to see what happens next. Maybe next time you could prof read so it makes sense. Well done, because you made me want to read more of your story. Maybe next time you could control c control shift v so your writing doesn't go off the page. Keep up the gret work.
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DeleteHi Azaria It's me Kyrhan again. This story is amazing. I can't wait to see what happens next. Maybe next time you could proof read so it makes sense. Well done! You made me want to read more of your story. Maybe next time you could control c control shift v so your writing doesn't go off the page. Keep up the great work.
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