I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Azaria, It's me Katelyn.(Your blogging buddy) I really like you post, I like the background but it is kind of hard to see the writing. Maybe next time you could add a caption to explain why you made this. Maybe you could add some more things about yourself. Keep up the great work!
hi Azaria its Emily here i love how you put a amazing background i really love your posts.Mabe next time you can talk about were your from and what you do in your spear time so you can btb (better than before)byyyeeee
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
hi our birthday is the same and we are the same age you should a little bit more detail/Stuff about you
ReplyDeleteHi Azaria, It's me Katelyn.(Your blogging buddy) I really like you post, I like the background but it is kind of hard to see the writing. Maybe next time you could add a caption to explain why you made this. Maybe you could add some more things about yourself. Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeletehi Azaria its Emily here i love how you put a amazing background i really love your posts.Mabe next time you can talk about were your from and what you do in your spear time so you can btb (better than before)byyyeeee
ReplyDeleteHi this is me Gunveen in your class it is good to see you telling some information about you.
ReplyDeleteHi Gunveen thank you for your comment
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